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Your mama said my mama was blacker than burnt white toast My daddy said your daddy was a vanilla, rice cake loving Oriole Your brother said my brother was a jive, jitterbugging jigaboo My sister said your sister was a nappy head, big lip snaggletooth Your best friend said my best friend was an empty can of dummy orange juice My best friend said your best friend was a cuckoo for Coco Puffs fruit loop I heard you said that I was a lazy, waging the tail barf boy You heard that I said you was a bowlegged, cross-eyed Barbie toy As children we were taught that stick and stones may break our bones But words could never hurt Good advice though that may be, we know better ... Words do hurt people feelings deeply

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Date: 10/28/2017 7:42:00 PM
Awesome write Freddie because its so true! I couldn't help but chuckle at some of the funny things you call each other though, especially the cuckoo for coco puffs fruit loop one!~Che :)
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Date: 10/28/2017 3:43:00 PM
It is true physical wounds do heal given time but psychological wounds we carry forever and can be reopened at any time. People say that ugly things happened in other places and thus they feel they can divest themselves of responsibility. Not true we are all responsible.
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Date: 10/28/2017 11:07:00 AM
A Blue Ribbon for this well boned sleek coated fine muscled poem. Fave my dear. Peace and Love mo :)
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