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Playful Sleep

Blue blissful velvet wings caress warm breeze on my golden paws at violet dusk. Scent of primrose petals nuzzles my fur, nectar-kissed friends sing me to playful sleep. August 13, 2020 Double Tetractys Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper Used Image #3 Syllables: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1 checked on howmanysyllables.com

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/28/2020 9:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Enjoy your win and day writing away...............

V. Deepa

Date: 8/28/2020 2:30:00 AM

Very beautiful imagery dear Aditi mam.. You have a unique perception..Done great:-) Congratulations on your wonderful win. Take care.Much love:-)

John Watt

Date: 8/27/2020 11:15:00 AM

Congratulations for your #1 win, my friend. This was well deserving of such an honor. Blessings ~ John

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/27/2020 9:32:00 AM

BIG CONGRATS to win TOP as usual. Blessings.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/27/2020 8:53:00 AM

Thank you so much for participating in the contest, Aditi, great imagery and flow. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

John Watt

Date: 8/22/2020 4:36:00 PM

Lovely personification of the cat playing with blue butterflies. I wish you all the best in Eve's contest with this perfectly stated lullaby. God bless ~ John

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/21/2020 4:29:00 PM

Scent of primrose petals...so pretty!

Alkas Poetry

Date: 8/14/2020 4:06:00 AM

Adorable, lovely verses... smartness and pure poetry... salute alkas

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/13/2020 8:18:00 AM

so enjoyed the blue blissful velvet wings...you compose such lovely words to form images.