Aditi Mishra Poet Tetractys

Playful Sleep

Blue
blissful
velvet wings
caress warm breeze
on my golden paws at violet dusk.
Scent of primrose petals nuzzles my fur,
nectar-kissed friends 
sing me to
playful
sleep.


August 13, 2020

Double Tetractys Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Used Image #3
Syllables: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1 checked on howmanysyllables.com

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Paula Goldsmith August 28, 2020 at 9:48 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Enjoy your win and day writing away...............

V. Deepa August 28, 2020 at 2:30 AM Very beautiful imagery dear Aditi mam.. You have a unique perception..Done great:-) Congratulations on your wonderful win. Take care.Much love:-)

John Watt August 27, 2020 at 11:15 AM Congratulations for your #1 win, my friend. This was well deserving of such an honor. Blessings ~ John

Anisha Dutta August 27, 2020 at 9:32 AM BIG CONGRATS to win TOP as usual. Blessings.

Eve Roper August 27, 2020 at 8:53 AM Thank you so much for participating in the contest, Aditi, great imagery and flow. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

John Watt August 22, 2020 at 4:36 PM Lovely personification of the cat playing with blue butterflies. I wish you all the best in Eve's contest with this perfectly stated lullaby. God bless ~ John

Kim Rodrigues August 21, 2020 at 4:29 PM Scent of primrose petals...so pretty!

Alkas Poetry August 14, 2020 at 4:06 AM Adorable, lovely verses... smartness and pure poetry... salute alkas

Jeanne Mcgee August 13, 2020 at 8:18 AM so enjoyed the blue blissful velvet wings...you compose such lovely words to form images.