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Playful Day

The sun shone brightly On this breezy spring day A black cat stalked a yellow bird in play, As he stepped lightly across the fields of hay Covered with dew , Alarmed , the bird flew Leaving the cat with nothing to do The sun shone brightly on this breezy spring day As the mouse appeared suddenly through the field of hay And once again the cat turned to play

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/28/2012 7:06:00 AM
Very descriptive work..I can just see the scene..Cats are the number one killer of birds..Sara
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Date: 10/15/2012 2:52:00 PM
Sounds so perfectly descriptive of cats. Well done.
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Date: 10/14/2012 4:41:00 PM
I feel real lazy, (in a good way) reading this poem. Just like I am sitting under a shady tree, the witness to this little cat's play. Nice one Jimmy. One love Joy Wells
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Date: 10/13/2012 3:10:00 PM
the mouse saw the danger and quickly ran away,leaving the sorrowful cat with no one to play,lol,your poem dragged me,lol,great write Jim,great write
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Jim Joyce
Date: 10/13/2012 5:44:00 PM
hey thanks ..u write some pretty darn good poetry urself ..love the way u rhyme
Date: 10/13/2012 11:44:00 AM
A pleasant and sweet poem. - Have a lovely weekend Jim. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Jim Joyce
Date: 10/13/2012 5:45:00 PM
t.y. t.y. ...many thanks for the lovely comment

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