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dancing in a play the glare of a blazing sun The clouds have moved on Written: May 10, 2022

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 5/13/2022 8:42:00 AM

That's beautiful.... The image and the poem.great write

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/12/2022 10:20:00 AM

Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious, - The Sound of Music - I could not think of a more apt description of such great poetic creation, Bravo Lesaad. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/11/2022 8:28:00 AM

Phantasmagoric Haiku, my friend, Lasaad. A work of art! Be blessed!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/11/2022 1:44:00 AM

great dance

Valsa George

Date: 5/10/2022 9:13:00 PM

The picture shows clearly what you have tried to convey ! Agree with what Gershon has said.... a "great pic-poem combo"....

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/10/2022 6:15:00 PM

Yes! Such an awe-inspiring pic-poem combo, Lasaad. Bravo! ~ Gershon

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/10/2022 12:12:00 PM

HelloLassad, this is such a beautiful poem. Enjoy your day my friend.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/10/2022 11:07:00 AM

Oh, I really love this one, Lasaad. Particularly during dusk, you see this "glare of a blazing sun." But the last line is the really gripping one...metaphoric in nature. Good stuff, my friend!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/10/2022 10:23:00 AM

A stunning image Lasaad, it's as if the sky is ablaze. Tom