Play In the Sky

dancing in a play
the glare of a blazing sun
The clouds have moved on

Written: May 10, 2022

analogyskysunhaiku

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Paghunda Zahid

May 13, 2022 at 8:42 AM

That's beautiful.... The image and the poem.great write

Jennifer Proxenos

May 12, 2022 at 10:20 AM

Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious, - The Sound of Music - I could not think of a more apt description of such great poetic creation, Bravo Lesaad. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

Demetrios Trifiatis

May 11, 2022 at 8:28 AM

Phantasmagoric Haiku, my friend, Lasaad. A work of art! Be blessed!

Victor Buhagiar

May 11, 2022 at 1:44 AM

great dance

Valsa George

May 10, 2022 at 9:13 PM

The picture shows clearly what you have tried to convey ! Agree with what Gershon has said.... a "great pic-poem combo"....

Gershon Wolf

May 10, 2022 at 6:15 PM

Yes! Such an awe-inspiring pic-poem combo, Lasaad. Bravo! ~ Gershon

Darlene De Beaulieu

May 10, 2022 at 12:12 PM

HelloLassad, this is such a beautiful poem. Enjoy your day my friend.

L Milton Hankins

May 10, 2022 at 11:07 AM

Oh, I really love this one, Lasaad. Particularly during dusk, you see this "glare of a blazing sun." But the last line is the really gripping one...metaphoric in nature. Good stuff, my friend!