Platter of Delight

Oatmeal cookies green and red; Chocolate bon-bons, Cocoa blanket on smores bed All candy cane striped ‘neath caramel cage What delight Ummm!
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Krutsinger Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 5:04 PM
This was so scrumptious, that I beat out the syllables, thinking it had to be more than the 33, and you got the 33 on the "money". Which is what part of me suspected all along. Well done M.L. I am throwing pretend caramels your way.
Kiser Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 2:28 PM
Oh, thank you and thanks for the pretend caramels; I'll have to make you a platter of delights in a caramel cage. Thanks again for stopping by.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 11:33 AM
Epulaeryu’s delight in the season’s best! Scrumdiliumcious! (Sp?)
Kiser Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 12:01 PM
Thanks so much. Happy Holidays.
Makama Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 10:33 AM
You simply killed it here... You undo yourself each time your creativity manifests from the inspirations coming out of the barracks of your intellectualism. just yummy!
Kiser Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 11:38 AM
Ooh, thanks so much, Funom; I appreciate it.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 10:28 AM
"Ty, M.L. for the gracious comments on my poem "Alova." Some men like to be submissive to domineering women like Alova in a perverse way. Many psychiatrists espouse that because a lot of powerful men mistreat people so bad all day long, they subconsciously feel they deserve to be punished in some sick sado-erotic form. Anywho ... I appreciate your keen insights. Love and best wishes for the holidays."
Kiser Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 11:38 AM
Thanks you Freddie and best wishes for your holidays, as well.
Cunningham Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 10:24 AM
These poems about food create images that make you hunger for them. A delight indeed. Tom.
Kiser Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 11:37 AM
They are supposed to; glad you told me that; I wasn't sure if it was tempting enough. HA; thanks.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 10:24 AM
Real scrumptious poetry, M.L. I have to say my diabetic manifesto prayers after reading this. lol! A sweet sweet Epulaeryu. Have to try my hand at this lovely poem form. Fantastic holiday treat. Love and smiles and smiles of joy.
Kiser Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 11:37 AM
Thanks so much, Freddie; I'm glad you liked it. Remember, it can all be made with sweeteners other than sugar. Glad you stopped by to read and comment.
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