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Platter of Delight

Oatmeal cookies green and red; Chocolate bon-bons, Cocoa blanket on smores bed All candy cane striped ‘neath caramel cage What delight Ummm!

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/19/2018 5:04:00 PM

This was so scrumptious, that I beat out the syllables, thinking it had to be more than the 33, and you got the 33 on the "money". Which is what part of me suspected all along. Well done M.L. I am throwing pretend caramels your way.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/20/2018 2:28:00 PM

Oh, thank you and thanks for the pretend caramels; I'll have to make you a platter of delights in a caramel cage. Thanks again for stopping by.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/19/2018 11:33:00 AM

Epulaeryu’s delight in the season’s best! Scrumdiliumcious! (Sp?)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/19/2018 12:01:00 PM

Thanks so much. Happy Holidays.

Funom Makama

Date: 12/18/2018 10:33:00 AM

You simply killed it here... You undo yourself each time your creativity manifests from the inspirations coming out of the barracks of your intellectualism. just yummy!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/18/2018 11:38:00 AM

Ooh, thanks so much, Funom; I appreciate it.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/18/2018 10:28:00 AM

"Ty, M.L. for the gracious comments on my poem "Alova." Some men like to be submissive to domineering women like Alova in a perverse way. Many psychiatrists espouse that because a lot of powerful men mistreat people so bad all day long, they subconsciously feel they deserve to be punished in some sick sado-erotic form. Anywho ... I appreciate your keen insights. Love and best wishes for the holidays."

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/18/2018 11:38:00 AM

Thanks you Freddie and best wishes for your holidays, as well.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/18/2018 10:24:00 AM

These poems about food create images that make you hunger for them. A delight indeed. Tom.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/18/2018 11:37:00 AM

They are supposed to; glad you told me that; I wasn't sure if it was tempting enough. HA; thanks.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/18/2018 10:24:00 AM

Real scrumptious poetry, M.L. I have to say my diabetic manifesto prayers after reading this. lol! A sweet sweet Epulaeryu. Have to try my hand at this lovely poem form. Fantastic holiday treat. Love and smiles and smiles of joy.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/18/2018 11:37:00 AM

Thanks so much, Freddie; I'm glad you liked it. Remember, it can all be made with sweeteners other than sugar. Glad you stopped by to read and comment.