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Fear of freedom, blue skies now seem grey 
Phlegmatic pessimism, own hand stays
Whilst cheerful maverick
Fearless to try new tricks
Makes escape to freedom, simple play

06-May-2021

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syllable count: 9,9,6,6,9

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Date: 5/7/2021 8:58:00 AM
Nothing "simple" about this but I sense a bit of playfulness in your execution.
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Date: 5/7/2021 6:59:00 PM
in keeping with the spirit of limericks!

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