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Fear of freedom, blue skies now seem grey Phlegmatic pessimism, own hand stays Whilst cheerful maverick Fearless to try new tricks Makes escape to freedom, simple play 06-May-2021 Quitters never win poetry contest Sponsor: Margarita Lillico syllable count: 9,9,6,6,9

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Date: 5/7/2021 8:58:00 AM
Nothing "simple" about this but I sense a bit of playfulness in your execution.
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Date: 5/7/2021 6:59:00 PM
in keeping with the spirit of limericks!

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