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Platonic

I will love you always In my dreams I may love you In my dreams we'll be free No papers will stop us No religion will break us in my dreams we'll be free You and I together You hold my hands You hold my heart We belong to each other In my dreams I've been looking at you forever

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Aqua Marine

Date: 10/13/2017 9:57:00 AM

This has a songlikefeel to it, Wintessa- and it simply says a lot- you have used repetition of words very effectively- they give strength to your convictions, of remaining loyal in your love. : )

Wintessa De Guzman
Date: 10/13/2017 10:50:00 AM

Thank you for the compliments :)