Platitudes

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beautiful flatworm

Lovely, nice but falls flat.


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falls flat your platitudes, slinking platyhelminthes, flat worms in scant two dimensions, crumpled

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Date: 7/12/2017 10:14:00 AM
Excellent and profound. You have that unique skill of beating the peak. This is a wonderful stuff, always beating our expectation. Can wait to jump to your next page.
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