Platinum suite Juliet

He yearned for a modern Romeo moment - but she lived on tenth floor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Zahid Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 9:56 AM
Haha .. that was funny
Herrick Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 3:07 PM
...so he threw a rock...? ...or he was lazy and went for a street level girl...?
Hind Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 1:38 PM
Haha
Dietrich Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 1:14 PM
hahaha
Andresen Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 11:07 AM
- A good one :))) - hugs
Williams Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 9:22 PM
Lol. Could you have taken the stairs? Very humorous one-liner ...Hugs
Rolland Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 4:34 PM
excellent and so "urban" take care poet
Rodgers Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 4:18 PM
Silent One, your poem encapsulates a poignant desire for a modern Romeo moment, constrained by the physical distance of ten floors. The simplicity of this yearning carries a depth of emotion, adding a contemporary twist to a classic tale. Well-crafted and evocative! - Blessings, Daniel
Ray Choudhury Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 3:36 PM
Ha Ha! Nowadays these high-rise buildings are such an obstacle for romantic moments! Clever Monoku!
Kendrick Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 1:25 PM
LOL. Did it have an elevator? Thanks for sharing this one with us. I enjoyed the laugh. Your visit to my page letting me know I placed in your contest was uplifting.Thanks for the honor of being there. Sara K
One Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 1:33 PM
The elevator is always broken... lol thanks
Empress Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 11:54 AM
Oh! Lol modern day problems seems like! This would have been a great for a limerick. You should have written a limerick! Your sense of humor is on point, very well crafted. I crave for a juliet moment too but in this modern world I guess we have other ways of embracing those moments! Lol :D this would be great for. POTD! A fave for me! Cus in one line you made me smile! Brilliant and clever! Only few can do that! And you do it effortlessly’ . Not sure how you do it but well its the silent one!
One Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 1:34 PM
This was just a little joke , a thought that came to me lol.. thanks
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