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Platinum suite Juliet

He yearned for a modern Romeo moment - but she lived on tenth floor.

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 1/15/2024 9:56:00 AM

Haha .. that was funny

Jude Herrick

Date: 1/13/2024 3:07:00 PM

...so he threw a rock...? ...or he was lazy and went for a street level girl...?

Paige Hind

Date: 1/12/2024 1:38:00 PM

Haha

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2024 1:14:00 PM

hahaha

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/11/2024 11:07:00 AM

- A good one :))) - hugs

Maria Williams

Date: 1/10/2024 9:22:00 PM

Lol. Could you have taken the stairs? Very humorous one-liner ...Hugs

Yann Rolland

Date: 1/10/2024 4:34:00 PM

excellent and so "urban" take care poet

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/10/2024 4:18:00 PM

Silent One, your poem encapsulates a poignant desire for a modern Romeo moment, constrained by the physical distance of ten floors. The simplicity of this yearning carries a depth of emotion, adding a contemporary twist to a classic tale. Well-crafted and evocative! - Blessings, Daniel

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 1/10/2024 3:36:00 PM

Ha Ha! Nowadays these high-rise buildings are such an obstacle for romantic moments! Clever Monoku!

Tom Woody

Date: 1/10/2024 3:13:00 PM

What did she look like? I mean, if she's a babe...

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/10/2024 3:09:00 PM

what, no balcony? Poor guy. Appreciate the light-hearted Monoku. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/10/2024 1:25:00 PM

LOL. Did it have an elevator? Thanks for sharing this one with us. I enjoyed the laugh. Your visit to my page letting me know I placed in your contest was uplifting.Thanks for the honor of being there. Sara K

Silent One
Date: 1/10/2024 1:33:00 PM

The elevator is always broken... lol thanks

Ink Empress

Date: 1/10/2024 11:54:00 AM

Oh! Lol modern day problems seems like! This would have been a great for a limerick. You should have written a limerick! Your sense of humor is on point, very well crafted. I crave for a juliet moment too but in this modern world I guess we have other ways of embracing those moments! Lol :D this would be great for. POTD! A fave for me! Cus in one line you made me smile! Brilliant and clever! Only few can do that! And you do it effortlessly’ . Not sure how you do it but well its the silent one!

Silent One
Date: 1/10/2024 1:34:00 PM

This was just a little joke , a thought that came to me lol.. thanks