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Planted: Real Poetry To Live By

I play with shadows under guise of light and dark ripened under a half-met sun ripp'd where tainted thoughts dare run looking down, afleet barren to thrust flowers slain and seeds lay rough all the while the weeds won't grow til her toil unearthed in muddy soil patted pasties put, dripp'd in soot dirtied mouths and unwashed foot tied up a mare/amoré amount to what the rituals, trinitized, doeful eyes no doubt wide, batting, abating awaiting wished upon the well waters and her will wash a'cross surrender's pill soon delivered

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Lady Labyrinth

Date: 4/3/2020 9:56:00 PM

You are what your Soul sings. Shadows, may bring the Light, but then again... x

Ts Poetry
Date: 4/4/2020 9:35:00 AM

Light and love, a view, an afternoon of two...me and you xx

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/3/2020 9:57:00 PM

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zLkLyjIheo0

Eve Roper

Date: 4/3/2020 12:33:00 PM

Enjoyable and soothing write, my friend, I love the first stanza, "I play with shadows under guise of light and dark ripened under a half-met sun ripp'd where tainted thoughts dare run". . The descriptive just stunning.

Ts Poetry
Date: 4/4/2020 9:34:00 AM

Thank you dear Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 4/3/2020 12:27:00 PM

You made me smile with an intriguing write , I interpret your lines a once barren heart now filled with seeds of love well penned TS:-) hugs Jan xx

Ts Poetry
Date: 4/4/2020 9:33:00 AM

Thanks Jan

Kelli White

Date: 4/3/2020 11:13:00 AM

Beautiful how barren the ground is right now before the flowers and grass sprout. Love kelli

Ts Poetry
Date: 4/4/2020 9:33:00 AM

Thank you Kelli, the weather is heading in the right direction