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Plank In Your Eye

How can it be that you're trying to tell me that I am not seeing what you're saying? You should really think twice before giving your advice because your own situation is displaying! Now if you're going to tell me the way you see things should be, that's fine, but you know, just before you try- this tiny speck of dust that's making me blink- can't compare to that "plank in YOUR eye!" Now it has been said that a speck in the eye will cause one to see three worlds!- but the more that I blink, yes.... it is going away, and a clearer vision unfurls! With the good intentions, I know that you have, I offer this for you to try- you will see much more clearly, quite frankly.... and sincerely, when you remove that "plank in YOUR eye!"

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Date: 3/28/2019 4:39:00 AM
Excellent
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Date: 3/27/2019 5:23:00 AM
beautiful poetic expression
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Date: 3/27/2019 3:33:00 AM
Good advice and good poem and so true!
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Date: 2/24/2016 4:05:00 PM
Clever and sarcastic - my favorites ... CayCay
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Walter T. Ashe
Date: 2/24/2016 6:59:00 PM
Thank you CayCay!....and sometimes there's the " double planker!" :-)

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