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Planetarium

PLANETARIUM 

the dome stars alight
moon-eyes view the milky way
with cookies in hand

7/31/2018

planethaiku

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Warren Doll

August 1, 2018 at 7:34 AM

Kim, this is a wonderful haiku. Man made nature with a snack, What a unique subject./ Warren :)

Kim Rodrigues

August 1, 2018 at 9:26 AM

Thank you, Warren! :)

Tom Cunningham

July 31, 2018 at 3:11 PM

Viewing the heavens in the warm with a few nibbles,bliss. Reminds me I've got to book my KSC tour. Tom

Kim Rodrigues

July 31, 2018 at 6:12 PM

Awesome, dear Tom!

Michelle Faulkner

July 31, 2018 at 2:13 PM

I'm with Caren - craving a Milky Way and a glass of milk now!

Kim Rodrigues

July 31, 2018 at 6:11 PM

You must...the planets are aligned ;)

Caren Krutsinger

July 31, 2018 at 1:48 PM

You have put all of my favorite words in this one - stars, milky way, cookies. I am running toward my cupboard right now, searching for a cookie or a Milky Way.

Kim Rodrigues

July 31, 2018 at 6:11 PM

The question is do you dip into the milky way ;) Thanks, Friend!

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