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Planet Venus a Woman In Its True Sense

Viciously, infernally incredibly hot, is its dominance Excitedly referred to as ‘Women come from Venus”, Naturally, Roman Goddess of beauty and love, ingenious, Unsure of falling in love with Venus, no water I fear, Seduced by folklore, don’t become a foolish Pioneer! Contest Info : "planet" Sponsor: Matt Caliri Dated 28th May 2021

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 7/9/2021 1:08:00 PM

Haha this is a great one. Was it placed in the contest? You have truly nailed it Jennifer

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/24/2021 8:16:00 PM

"Women come from Venus” Makes perfect sense. :) You have created a Masterpiece my dear sweet friend. This is so beautifully written and presented. :) Hugs, Brandy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/14/2021 1:43:00 PM

So well expressed. ;0)

Angela Crabtree

Date: 6/7/2021 3:42:00 PM

I love the history of this goddess. One of my favorites. A wonderful poem, Jennifer. Saved it to read again :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/7/2021 9:14:00 AM

Not I ;). Good luck in the contest my dear .

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/6/2021 11:14:00 AM

The planet Venus comes alive in this fascinating and imaginative acrostic. I enjoyed it so much, Jennifer. Best wishes for the contest, Evelyn

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/3/2021 10:16:00 AM

A wonderful acrostic write on Venus. Now for a glass of ice water. May you be blessed...................

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/2/2021 11:29:00 AM

Hot stuff is Venus Goddess of love and coming from the hottest planet it’s no surprise at all. A marvellous Acrostic Jennifer. Best wishes ~ Belle

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 6/1/2021 11:02:00 PM

Hello Jennifer … interesting verse indeed Jennifer. Very descriptive view of a time in early Greece - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay

Jcb Brul

Date: 5/30/2021 2:14:00 AM

Superb description! This is a sure winner!! Best wishes. Have a lovely day!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/29/2021 8:52:00 PM

Lovely description with a nice sprinkle of humor there too, Jennifer. Very nice! Good luck in the contest! :) gw

Judy Ball

Date: 5/29/2021 6:46:00 PM

Nicely done Jennifer. God Bless, JB

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/29/2021 5:25:00 PM

This is a great Acrostic Jennifer. Well done ! I hope you have a nice evening :)

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 5/29/2021 1:45:00 AM

Well penned acrostic on Venus dear Jenni... Venus.. the Roman Goddess of beauty and love... Sorry Jenni... I was not so active in Soup... for the past two months... Am in my native place right now.... Have a great day dear friend... Hugs... ~ Ani

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/28/2021 2:28:00 PM

Beautiful display of planetary completion dear Jennifer, thank you for sharing.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/28/2021 12:27:00 PM

Indeed a lovely and realistic portrait of the goddess of love. I like the warning you give in the last line. All the best, Jennifer.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/28/2021 11:51:00 AM

Two Venus actually, one Greek, one Roman. I like the Greek one more because she was refined. But some like it hot :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/28/2021 11:46:00 AM

WoW! Jenny, This is a great entry for the contest. I echo what Michelle said. That explains it all—best wishes in the contest. Well done, my friend. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/28/2021 11:15:00 AM

Yes, Venus is quite seductive and alluring, love the wry twist on your last line! Hope this does well for you in the contest~