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First bedtime story for kids: Nephiner was a planet beyond the Milky Way. It was a round, green planet. There was a population of five hundred thousand. Our hero, Tepry, a young boy of ten years wanders in his mind on how it would be life in other planets beyond Nephiner. One day while he was reading a book, he saw a picture of a planet called Earth. The curiosity makes Tepry to take the spaceship of his father Codry, and go to investigate were was located the Planet Earth. The velocity of the spaceship was so fast, that Tepry arrived to the Earth in the blink of an eye. He arrived in an amusement park. His clothes look like a spacial attire. The children who were playing in the park, thought that Tepry was an actor of one of the attractions. Tepry decided to leave the park and explore the planet. Meanwhile, in Nephiner, Codry found that Tepry and his spaceship were disappeared. He called the interstellar police to find Tepry. He found the story book on Tepry's room. It was opened in the page that illustrates the Planet Earth. He imagined that Tepry was on Planet Earth. Codry passed in front of a television store window in which a TV was tuned in a local news channel. The news that were transmitted consisted of wars, natural disasters and famine. After that horrifying view, Tepry decided to return to Nephiner. Also, his father would be worried about his absence. Tepry returned to Nephiner, before the Interstellar police started his searching. He runned to his father and hugged him. He asked for his pardon. Codry told Tepry that he forgives him. He asked Tepry how was his adventure on Planet Earth. Tepry told Codry about the images that he saw on the television. Nephiner was a peaceful planet. Codry said to Tepry that while humans do not see each other as equals the things he saw in the television would not end. Tepry agreed with Codry. It was night on Nephiner. Tepry went to sleep and dreamed about his adventure on Planet Earth. Nayda Ivette 11-29-2015

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