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------Iambic Tetrameter------

Planet Hope

who calls the loon's haunting echo? 
 {with coal-drunk countries, acid rain} 

 who sings the warblers pine-forest song? 
 {now that the sun filters no more} 

 who sings the river's darkness chants? 
 {with promise of cleanup long-tired past} 

 who sings the nation's peaceful hymns? 
 {now that the peacemakers triumphant war} 

 who sings the whale's mournful romance? 
 {now that the reef's coral is bleached} 

 steady ye lads of time-lost battles.... 
 {winged chariots will come to hasten your cause} 

 lo though the truth is covered with ash 
 {burnt offerings left at the alter of profit} 

 lo though the truth is blanched from our brain 
 {wagged to the ants, eager to march} 

 lo though our will has lost its way 
 kindness and love 
 will forever reign
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 1:42 PM
Congrats James on "Planet Hope" being featured. But can we call Washington Planet Dope. God Bless. Vince
Sweetheart Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 1:23 AM
Congrats James on featured poem this week on PS... wonderful write to share with luv..
Brown Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 11:39 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week James. Love, Carol
Shango Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 4:16 AM
This poem must be read again and again ... anyone missing its beauty have lost touch with history .. and as a mind seared to visions. Incredible vision and truth, great poetry. Thanks for your uplifting always, keep the sparks flying, my friend
Devonshire Avatar
March 11, 2009 at 12:09 PM
Great work, James! You touched on so many "time-lost battles" here: the environment, war, and lost hope for species that give great joy to mankind. You have a gift for words, my friend. Thanks for reading "Robbing the Dead." Love, Carolyn
Swanson Avatar
March 11, 2009 at 7:09 AM
Stunning... I just love this. A powerful wake up call. The tone is perfect and the subject is one near to my heart. Beautiful, beautiful work. :) Love, Amy
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