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Plain Things

Plain things in plain clothes doing plain things. Took a plane, deplaned in fresh air of the plains. Found plain things not drab sans complaint. Complacency in plain places displaced. 3/4/2018

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Mick Talbot

Date: 3/4/2018 2:32:00 PM

You plainly got the handle of plain, that was plain for all to read, plainly clever too... ;-) Mick

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/4/2018 2:37:00 PM

Thanks, Mick!

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 3/4/2018 12:14:00 PM

Very cute and clever. Gave me a chuckle.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/4/2018 2:08:00 PM

Awesome! Thanks, Dale!

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/4/2018 9:14:00 AM

Well done alliteration, Kim. It's an excellent idea to displace complacency.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/4/2018 11:35:00 AM

Thanks, sweet Line!