Plagues

PLAGUES Play with plagues Sing with states Fake with fragrance Steal with slates Draw humans with dust Brag with health Drowning in the shadows ofsoberiety I am a lost child I stay solo And speak so low In frightening bellow I am mean With no meaning I am god

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/29/2022 10:12:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you. (Please see the definition of Sonnet explained by the Poetry Site, and check alongside the poetry form that your used.)

Omokri Agatha
Date: 12/15/2022 6:34:00 PM

Thanks ma'am

Omokri Agatha

Date: 10/27/2022 12:40:00 PM

The poem is a subjective overhaul of the political situation in Nigeria. Through the eyes of the poet personae *I*, the state of the nation is mirrored using religious symbols like scepter, hell fire, Satan, rod, demi- god, etc. It's diction is shmoky and largely religious. Words such as sins, Armageddon etc have religious undertone and sometimes they are contradictory eg *White blood* which is an Oxymoron . Through the eyes of the poet personae identifiable by the use of the personal pronoun *I* , the state of the nation is revealed... It's diction is simple. Lastly, an understanding of the poet's background will help shed light and knowledge towards understanding and critiquing the poem effectively.