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contest Plagued by Memories- sponsor Ink Empress

Plagued by the memories of insoluble illusions that hang on the tapestry of yesterday where mythological masks were worn in another time, another place and are relived in pictures hanging on my mind's wall of sadness and loss when dreams of moonlight madness remind of love's longing the remembrance of faces and places stay in tortured realms, trapped in my soul heartfelt reminders of crumbling bouquets that turned yellow in their slow decay of unrecognized existence, dissolving away from reality that nothing lasts but memories that come in the stillness like a rush of wind before a storm brings a darker shade of thoughts that echo through time leading me to pause and remember the emotional upheaval of lament

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Date: 4/25/2025 12:59:00 PM
Frederic, dear friend, dear poet, I was struck by the potent, melancholy tone of your poem reinforced with imagery like "pictures hanging on my mind's wall of sadness and loss" and "nothing lasts but memories that come in the stillness like a rush of wind" - I know that feeling! You captured it with poetic finesse. "The emotional upheaval of lament" is a striking finale to a deep and soulful piece. Congratulations for your success in Ink's contest. Warmest wishes my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/25/2025 1:33:00 AM
Dear Frederick, This poem really did hit my soul in such an eloquent manner for the way youv expresser and how your words just flow here and your use or wordplay and so many lines in this really stood out for me! Especially love the lines "where mythological masks were worn in another time, another place and are relived in pictures" soulfully moving and "stay in tortured realms, trapped in my soul heartfelt reminders of crumbling bouquets that turned yellow in their slow decay" felt that! An exquisite and heartfelt poem that really did make me feel so much! Congratulations on your placement in my contest! Thank you for sharing . Fave it is
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