Places of Wait

the grass is green, the sky is blue
the sun waits, for the moon
and here i live for thee,
trusting, wondering, hoping, please, 
come to me...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 3:32 AM
Delighful poem Faire>>James
Esquire Avatar
March 22, 2009 at 7:36 PM
Dear Faire, This is like a mini Prayer I like it the flow is Great Imagery clear SUPERB when YOU don't know what Form of POETRY it is YOU can always use Free Verse ALWAYS...HG
Shango Avatar
March 22, 2009 at 6:08 AM
They wait upon the Lord shall renew their strenght ... (to wait for all earthly things). A quiet little poem with a beautiful melody. Thanks and welcome here. One love
Stockwood Avatar
March 22, 2009 at 12:37 AM
exellent poem
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