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Places I'Ve Peed Haiku Series

1 Sun glints off ripples Play of light in sheltered cove Scenic lavatory 2 Backyard full of stars Footsteps crack on frozen grass Moonlit lavatory 3 Forested mountain side Above twisting single track Rider’s lavatory 4 Over arid land Falling rain evaporates Hot Aussie dunny 5 Sandy beach stretches Tropical coral waters Pristine lavatory 6 Beneath St. Paul’s dome Lies manicured garden Monumental lav.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2018 6:27:00 PM

I remember this fun set!!! I came way down here to let you know, yes, I won the contest with that poem and I am so thankful. It garnered me a gift card at Amazon!!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/23/2017 8:16:00 AM

It was fun to read this one again.you could call it your Golden Shower Haiku Series.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/10/2015 4:54:00 PM

ha ha ha this made me laugh out loud Scott congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tammy Reams

Date: 3/10/2015 9:43:00 AM

Congrats on your win. I love this it reminds me of my husband. Love it! I've only heard of writing your name in the snow but this shows it can be done anywhere.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/9/2015 4:16:00 PM

Scott, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "BEGINNINGS" if you'd like. Hope you are having a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 6/20/2014 2:11:00 AM

Way to mark your spots with this piece of wet work!

Robin Davis

Date: 5/11/2014 8:05:00 AM

Scott These are very funny, creative, unique, humorous and unexpected. Made me smile and do "tinkles". LOL

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/23/2014 10:52:00 AM

Funny awesome write lool :D!!! Like the easy way you did it:),olive eloisa

Jack Horne

Date: 3/31/2014 3:54:00 PM

LOL, love your sense of humour - great haiku too : )

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2014 11:56:00 PM

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/26/2014 1:05:00 AM

Sun glints of ripples.. enjoying the lavatory, :) :) Scott, fun haiku...XOX~ Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/23/2014 10:57:00 AM

also thought it was funny that you peed by St. Paul's and in the "pristine" place! By the way, you really never heard of etheree before? it is such a cool poetry form. I even did a whole chapbook full of them at one time! You gotta do one.oh and I am gonna fave this set.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/23/2014 10:55:00 AM

hahaha. this set is SO clever. I loved how you changed it up and said DUNNY for the aussie one. I never heard that word before. You could use word like Water Closet by Niagra Falls or something. haha. gosh,,you could just keep going and going with this one. AWESOME set.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/22/2014 10:00:00 PM

thanks Scott, have a great night. Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/20/2014 8:47:00 PM

I like the series Scott, every haiku, is beautiful... xox~ LINDA

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/20/2014 9:57:00 AM

Ha ha, definately an original!

Louise Holley

Date: 3/11/2014 4:09:00 PM

wow a wealth of peeing experience you have under your belt there but have you peed on your own shoes though?