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places I've peed haiku series

1 Sun glints off ripples Play of light in sheltered cove Scenic lavatory 2 Backyard full of stars Footsteps crack on frozen grass Moonlit lavatory 3 Forested mountain side Above twisting single track Rider’s lavatory 4 Over arid land Falling rain evaporates Hot Aussie dunny 5 Sandy beach stretches Tropical coral waters Pristine lavatory 6 Beneath St. Paul’s dome Lies manicured garden Monumental lav.

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Date: 1/19/2018 6:27:00 PM
I remember this fun set!!! I came way down here to let you know, yes, I won the contest with that poem and I am so thankful. It garnered me a gift card at Amazon!!!
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Date: 2/23/2017 8:16:00 AM
It was fun to read this one again.you could call it your Golden Shower Haiku Series.
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Date: 3/10/2015 4:54:00 PM
ha ha ha this made me laugh out loud Scott congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/10/2015 9:43:00 AM
Congrats on your win. I love this it reminds me of my husband. Love it! I've only heard of writing your name in the snow but this shows it can be done anywhere.
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Date: 3/9/2015 4:16:00 PM
Scott, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "BEGINNINGS" if you'd like. Hope you are having a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA
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Date: 6/20/2014 2:11:00 AM
Way to mark your spots with this piece of wet work!
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Date: 5/11/2014 8:05:00 AM
Scott These are very funny, creative, unique, humorous and unexpected. Made me smile and do "tinkles". LOL
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Date: 4/23/2014 10:52:00 AM
Funny awesome write lool :D!!! Like the easy way you did it:),olive eloisa
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Date: 3/31/2014 3:54:00 PM
LOL, love your sense of humour - great haiku too : )
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Date: 3/29/2014 11:56:00 PM
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Date: 3/26/2014 1:05:00 AM
Sun glints of ripples.. enjoying the lavatory, :) :) Scott, fun haiku...XOX~ Linda
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Date: 3/23/2014 10:57:00 AM
also thought it was funny that you peed by St. Paul's and in the "pristine" place! By the way, you really never heard of etheree before? it is such a cool poetry form. I even did a whole chapbook full of them at one time! You gotta do one.oh and I am gonna fave this set.
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Date: 3/23/2014 10:55:00 AM
hahaha. this set is SO clever. I loved how you changed it up and said DUNNY for the aussie one. I never heard that word before. You could use word like Water Closet by Niagra Falls or something. haha. gosh,,you could just keep going and going with this one. AWESOME set.
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Date: 3/22/2014 10:00:00 PM
thanks Scott, have a great night. Light & Love
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Date: 3/20/2014 8:47:00 PM
I like the series Scott, every haiku, is beautiful... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 3/20/2014 9:57:00 AM
Ha ha, definately an original!
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Date: 3/11/2014 8:19:00 PM
What were you doing when this brainchild of a poem came to you.. Oh yeah, I guessed ;)
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Date: 3/11/2014 4:09:00 PM
wow a wealth of peeing experience you have under your belt there but have you peed on your own shoes though?
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Date: 3/11/2014 8:20:00 PM
You mean today?