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lightning struck and a sparrow fell into the nurturing arms of the great oak the branches grew and grew and it built a home. and eighteen years of fair weather blessed the bond built in the roots so deep, so strong in every vesicle, a memory. but one fowl storm and the branches gave way to drop the sparrow in its sleep. trust is earned but life is short and i can no longer fly.

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Date: 8/3/2017 5:27:00 AM
This is a wonderful metaphor. Extended from your first until the last line. It's a very lively image you painted here, a sad one, that I see, but beautifully written. Welcome to PoetrySoup
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Hannah Del Castillo
Date: 8/3/2017 5:17:00 PM
Thank you, Darren. I'm glad to have found this website. :)

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