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Place in the Sun

to relive this place
the perfection of summer
absolute blue skies
crickets cheering bel cantos
spark birds plugging for lawn grubs
remain in warm suns
obedient girasols
leave darkness behind

Copyright © Trina Layne | Year Posted 2025

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Sara Kendrick Date: 8/6/2025 7:03:00 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Creative lines penned. Way to go. Sara K Login to Reply Trina Layne Date: 8/10/2025 12:41:00 PM Thank you, Sara.

I Am Anaya Date: 8/3/2025 7:54:00 PM I like your choice of words, unusually delightful, pulls me in! Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply Trina Layne Date: 8/4/2025 8:12:00 AM Thank you, Anaya. Blessings ~TL

Oliver Mckeithan Date: 8/3/2025 10:49:00 AM Congrats on your placement in my contest Trina. Imagery is wonderful Login to Reply Trina Layne Date: 8/4/2025 8:11:00 AM Appreciated, Oliver. Great challenge - tanku!

Len Gasun Date: 8/2/2025 10:24:00 PM I can see and hear the excitement of summer in your wonderful write/poem my dear poet friend Trina. So love it and enjoyed. Thanks for sharing! Sorry for the late visit. Thanks a lot again for this gem. All the best always. Have a great wkend/new week ahead. Hugs Login to Reply

Bill Marable Date: 8/2/2025 4:42:00 AM ‘Crickets cheering’ celebrating sunlight Birds scratching for food Your poem just feels right For this late summer mood Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/30/2025 5:04:00 PM absolute blue skies crickets cheering bel cantos…so pleasant! Login to Reply Trina Layne Date: 7/30/2025 8:34:00 PM I appreciate your comments, Kim. Thanks for reviewing it.

Andrea Frierson Date: 7/30/2025 2:16:00 PM I like it very interesting. I do like how you use your words. Login to Reply Trina Layne Date: 7/30/2025 8:33:00 PM Thank you, Andrea. This was a fun tanku to write.

Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 7/30/2025 1:47:00 PM liked 'crickets cheering bel cantos/a great image...enjoy your day, Sara Login to Reply Trina Layne Date: 7/30/2025 8:32:00 PM Appreciated. Thanks for visiting, Sara.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/30/2025 12:39:00 PM - ... it's just to be enjoyed ... lovely sunshine poem, Trina :) - hugs Login to Reply Trina Layne Date: 7/30/2025 8:31:00 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise! Sunshine can be a state of mind. Blessings.