Pivotal Point

a pivotal point
that crucial moment
when all is clear

the fog dissipates
like fine crystal
all is transparent

the lucidity is astounding
the awareness, sharp
the acoustics, deafening

a pivotal point
when I realize
the depth of it all
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Eggins Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 10:52 AM
beautiful write touching on the profound , congrates on being featured this week kind regards Jayne x x
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September 10, 2009 at 7:35 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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September 8, 2009 at 5:47 PM
J.B - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj
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September 8, 2009 at 2:08 PM
JB, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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September 7, 2009 at 3:05 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week JB *>>James
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September 7, 2009 at 3:05 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week JB *>>James
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September 7, 2009 at 1:24 PM
Good use of imagery for a thought provoking poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
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September 7, 2009 at 7:06 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week JB. Love, Carol
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September 7, 2009 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations, JB, on having your poem featured this week. It is always delightful to read brilliant poetry like this. VERY nice- Keep those words flowing. Big Smile, Dane Ann
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September 7, 2009 at 5:44 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week JB,...awesome write !!! james
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