Pivotal Moment

a pivotal moment 
vital to the formation 
of the future self
a decisive event 
within the past self's
life's course that helped 
to create the present self
a notable influentially significant 
person within my existence 
far-reaching 
far-ranging 
extensive importance 
a momentous impact 
you were in the creation 
of the person that i have 
become would not have been the 
same without your influence 
in my life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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June 9, 2017 at 6:53 PM
Love it Dale, regards Kevin
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June 9, 2017 at 6:45 PM
Ah yes, life's journey, nicely composed Jaziel, Regards Kevin
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June 9, 2017 at 6:32 PM
Excellent poem, I really like this one Shari, sounds quite spiritual, thank you for sharing, Regards Kevin
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