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Pity, the Bread Where Sorrow Rests

Pity, The Bread Where Sorrow Rests The night is long, hours drag on by can not forgive, even though I try All is dark with bold shadows black telling me of the compassion I lack We see with eyes filled with sin this world our heart rests within Never seeing the sun in every sky Or the promised life after we die The night is long, I beat on stones with burning ache deep in my bones The crying rocks scream for more from behind that blue misery door I that knows why the eagle flies cloak myself in dark little lies Pity, the bread where sorrow rests a poor fare for any wayward guests I ponder thoughts best hidden away unforgiving this night, thus I pay The night is long, hours drag on by can not forgive, even though I try All is dark with bold shadows black telling me of the compassion I lack Robert J. Lindley

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/5/2015 1:07:00 PM
I am never disappointed coming here, the title indeed made me curious, the imagery here is amazing, very dark indeed, but also full of melancholy. A7 for me!
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Date: 5/5/2015 1:04:00 PM
- A deep and dark poem, Robert - If life will be good to live, we must all show compassion with each other - Compassion is the perfection of beauty sister - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/4/2015 8:54:00 PM
It's a great poem that expresses a present powerful emotion my dear friend, Robert. You did it very well. I love the flow and the refrain at the end. Sometimes it's not really easy to forgive, yet, if we do, we can't forget. However, soon, everything will gonna be fine since time changes and heals all wounds. Thanks a lot for sharing your precious gem my dear friend. Hope you're doing well. love lots and biggest hug, Leonora
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