Pity Not

PITY NOT


Pity not the one who his path is littered
With broken dreams
BUT
The one who dreams as companions had 
None on his way! 


© Demetrios Trifiatis
 09 OCTOBER 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Carrillo Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 11:04 AM
Pity not - how true are your words here. I myself don't like to ask for pity. By the way Congratulations on becomming a lifetime member. I have been wanting to do the same, but for now it's on hold. Thanks a lot for this Epigram..... Lucilla
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October 16, 2013 at 11:44 AM
Thank you my good friend, Lucy, God be with you these difficult times!
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October 9, 2013 at 11:48 PM
Demetrios, well done...........SKAT
Trifiatis Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 4:37 AM
Thank you SKAT for the visit and the comment!
Manassian Avatar
October 9, 2013 at 8:07 AM
As always...I wonder how you come up with the words, how you place them so well, how you capture wisdom so gloriously! Lovely write, my dear poet.
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October 9, 2013 at 9:56 AM
My dearest, poetess, the answer to your question is one: The same way you come up with your poems i.e. by inspiration and HIS blessings! Thank you for visiting and for your bighearted comment!
Sivey Avatar
October 9, 2013 at 6:33 AM
This is a very powerful and truthful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this masterful philosophical poem this morning! What a brilliant piece, you have successfully opened my mind up and brought reality within it! Fabulous Work!!
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October 9, 2013 at 9:59 AM
I am happy my friend, Russell, you appreciate so much my writing, I am even happier if have helped, in the least, your mind, although it doesn't need any help from me! Thank you for your openhanded comment!
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