Pity For My Mother

OH WHAT A PITY! 
I have made her suffer a lot, oh 
what a pity! 
She carried me around for nine 
month without seeing anybody to 
help her, oh what a pity! 
She is still taking care of me till this 
time, oh what a pity! 
She is still struggling for me to win 
the world, oh what a pity! 
'What can I do to comfort her, after 
all she's done.                             
A son is the father of the woman . 
That is the main things I think I can 
do for her... Am praying for the 
strength to do that......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 5, 2014 at 1:59 PM
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April 4, 2014 at 9:30 PM
Toheeb,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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April 4, 2014 at 8:44 PM
Toheeb, WOW WOW! , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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