Pitter Patter Dreams

rain greets the morning
  with a melancholy sigh -
    pitter patter dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Williams Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 7:15 AM
Nothing better then sleeping in with the pitter patter of raindrops sounds. You've described it so well Joseph,,,Maria
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2017 at 7:53 PM
love this kind of KU, Joseph. Hope the judge does too.
Andresen Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 1:53 PM
- I know that sound very well ... no sunshine in the near future - Lovely haiku, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 8:56 AM
Morning rain makes me want to go back to sleep...lovely
Sands Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 7:27 AM
Nice one Joseph. I can relate to this from hearing the rain patter lately. :)
Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 7:16 AM
Great imagery in this piece! Nicely done
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