Pithy Empurpled Writing

Magniloquent words of an empurpled writer. Where lofty, yet showily expressed words make details brighter. Concise, rhetorically composed words made solely for an effect. Causing pithy comments to draw a picture, for readers to connect. The complexion and pigment of colorful words then meld into a spectral light. Blended with the authors passion for the topic, causing both to ignite. .... Smooth white sands blow across the dune Distant notes from a banjo floats into a tune. Ancient ironweed graces the desert with vibrant color As sunset beckons for twilight to be evenings romantic caller. Beach peas and daisies grow between cliffs of living stone Stand embellished fig trees on seeded winds were flown. ..... Written with a shimmer of color floating on an iridescent feather. Titillates the plateau of ones senses on aromatic breezes of white heather. first three have definitions to words in each stanza center three stanza's and last are examples of expression relative to the first three. Carole Cookie Arnold 2009

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Date: 3/17/2011 12:11:00 AM
good to see your poem featured it is no surprise, a great piece, Cookie
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Date: 3/15/2011 5:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Cookie. Have a wonderful week and may you have baskets full of inspiration come your way. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/16/2010 7:26:00 AM
cookie you are a great writer i loved reading alot of your poetry today, and each poem written as beautifully as the last! ( i envy your skills) they were all great and i loved them! =)jo
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Date: 1/4/2010 4:36:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. may your stay be a long one.. and may your new year be filled with blessings.. luv.. creativeness... friendships.. health.. Linda-Mare "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry tonight .. enjoyed reading this delight...
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Date: 1/4/2010 2:22:00 PM
Carole, This was very inventive and a pleasure to read. Pithy indeed! You have an outstanding grasp of the literary mind...Cheers and Mahalo
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