Pitfalls

Lord of things literary, please bring me
another dictionary
with unused words for novel weave.
The old clichés I’d bury.

Musicians and artists use the tools
of those who have gone before.
The poet’s words are his alone
to be avoided evermore.

Poetry Soup made up a list
of old worn out cliché’s.
If I should read these dread naysays,
they’ll stick in my head always.

My devious brain will take them
and turn them all around
and present them as fresh ideas
that my clever muse has found.

So many poets have gone before
I fear there is nothing to say
that hasn’t been said and said and said
in every conceivable way.











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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Deschler Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 11:27 PM
There are only so many ways to express something, so the same words are likely to be used and reused, again and again. Then, someone comes along who rewrites history and leaves the rest of us speechless! Congratulations on your win with this creative write! Great work, Joyce!
May Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 8:46 PM
Congrats on your win Joyce...
Callus Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 3:49 PM
Impressive write, Joyce! I partly agree with you, for eventually you find that you did it your way!! congrats on a fine win. // paul
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May 11, 2014 at 2:10 AM
Joyce, Thank you for everything, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Have yourself a wonderful night, and a beautiful mother's days.... (enjoy my latest blog if you like) xox~ Linda"
Ball Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 3:21 PM
This is just too cute Joyce. Loved it. Clever way to fight writer's block. Try a peek at my "The Would-be Poet". God Bless, JB
Foulk Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 11:29 AM
very well written and so creative.
Muzzey Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 9:56 AM
You took the words right out of my mouth Joyce. A well penned and enjoyable write, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
Brown Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 8:18 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Joyce. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. May you have a wonderful week and enjoy life to the fullest. Love, Carol
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July 10, 2011 at 10:33 PM
A rery elvelant piece Joyce, i flear you have coursed a brit of praranioa to creap into my "mind however" i shall tayke car not to be, so pradikable in fruiture...Ha Ha,,and enjoyed the read..!
Smith Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 7:23 PM
I really love this one. Take care. Dana'lynn
Richards Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 6:13 PM
Oh Joyce, I too have felt this way so many times. "How on earth could I write anything at all that hasn't done better before by someone else, someone brighter and more gifted?" You have spoken what I often ponder....and said it better than I could...that's for sure! :)
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