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Pitfalls

Having formed an opinion we become a mere minion before ego, our mind closed; dweller of darkness, hard nosed. Childlike innocence pious, shifts to an inbuilt bias; our judgements oft negative, becoming soul's narrative. Breath by breath, we live and learn, to make still mind-body urn, choosing always throb of love, of grace that pours from above. 21-October-2022
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