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Pitch Dark

pitch dark small chamber abnormal pulsating mass loving human heart blood regurgitating heart grows weaker with each beat Sponsor: Suzette Crous Contest: Tanka-The Pivot

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/26/2012 9:14:00 PM

DYNAMIC VISUAL BRINGING CHILLS TO THIS HEART SARA .. SCARY ONE LUV JUST IN MOOD FOR HALLOWEEN TOO ..

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/26/2012 1:21:00 PM

The heart growing weaker Sara..) Much to think on again.. I would hope the spirit grows stronger;in you as a counterpoint.."May you be blessed in abundance By the Lord.. Thank you as always for comments..)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2012 2:40:00 PM

Very descriptive, Sara. It will be great fun to see who wins this pivot tanka contest!

Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/25/2012 12:09:00 PM

A truly unique and remarkable tanka. Love to read you poems.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/25/2012 7:47:00 AM

Wow, the power within your lines is truly fascinating and amazing my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous and fully remarkable poem this morning! What an enjoyable and energetic piece, Great Work!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/25/2012 7:06:00 AM

Enjoyed part Two as well Rick