Pistol

Loaded, close, ready
May I never hear it speak 
Resting cold--silent
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Burch Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 9:07 PM
Ray Congratulations on your win!! This is fabulous. Deb
Williams Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 12:57 PM
Congratulations on your win...David
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 4:42 PM
Love yours, Ray. And I think it's the only one titled Pistol. Congrats.
Poet Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 11:02 AM
Very nice Ray!Congrats on the win.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 10:34 AM
Many congratulations on your number 1 Ray xx
Johnson Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 12:05 AM
Congratulations on a poem loaded with emotion. Joyce
Song Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 9:10 PM
Ray-U hit this one right outta the ball park! Outstanding emotion in your haiku! Just brilliant! gwendolen
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February 25, 2013 at 9:06 PM
Hi Ray, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2013 at 10:29 PM
This is very nice and the message that you send through it, Ray.
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