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Pistol

Loaded, close, ready
May I never hear it speak 
Resting cold--silent

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/22/2013 9:07:00 PM
Ray Congratulations on your win!! This is fabulous. Deb
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Date: 2/27/2013 12:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...David
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Date: 2/26/2013 4:42:00 PM
Love yours, Ray. And I think it's the only one titled Pistol. Congrats.
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Date: 2/26/2013 11:02:00 AM
Very nice Ray!Congrats on the win.
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Date: 2/26/2013 10:34:00 AM
Many congratulations on your number 1 Ray xx
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Date: 2/26/2013 12:05:00 AM
Congratulations on a poem loaded with emotion. Joyce
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Date: 2/25/2013 9:10:00 PM
Ray-U hit this one right outta the ball park! Outstanding emotion in your haiku! Just brilliant! gwendolen
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Date: 2/25/2013 9:06:00 PM
Hi Ray, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA
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Date: 1/30/2013 10:29:00 PM
This is very nice and the message that you send through it, Ray.
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