Pissing Off the Gods

~ Pissing Off The Gods~

A Poem by Debbie_Philly 

I wrote this while in allot of pain

I must have messed up this time
maybe I pissed off the Gods too
many times with promises of
devotion , maybe I'm not what
they want.
 
Defective,Diseased,Unsightly
 
I went into the box and asked 
for forgiveness for that sin 18
years ago, I thought I was 
pardoned sorry is always the
name. I was Sorry..... I still am
 
Maybe this is my punishment 
if its like this now will it be worse
after the lights go out , do they
just go out?
Will I get a reprieve for time and
suffering served .
 
THIS PAIN IS TOO INTENSE 
 
I'm not really sure how much 
more I can bare , truthfully
The pills you ask?? Ha Yea
well they don't work really
Can't even get a buzz to
forget for a while, yet they
dominate my life.
 
I must have pissed someone off
it's the only thing I can come up
with, what other reason for all
this PAIN , my whole life .....
 
It's building to a crescendo
that's getting ready to explode
in a big way. I feel it coming and
when it does ... DUCK....
because it's gonna be Messy
 
By: Debbie Mills Kelly
 
This is not a feel sorry for me piece...
I know alot of people suffer. Its just
what came out of my head last night
and ended up... bleeding out onto 
the paper. Thank you !!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/5/2014 11:49:00 AM
Love the honesty and instead of being a feel sorry for me piece it has a gutsy ...if I pissed the Gods off then they pissed me off attituda about it....lol
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Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/5/2014 1:31:00 PM
Thank you so much Peter... yes thats how I felt at the time... :) Sometimes the pain is just that bad ... Thank you again !!
Date: 2/5/2014 9:39:00 AM
It bled rather well onto paper for sure. This was really great, not that I am an expert at poetry but I know when I read something and it sticks out like this means I like what I see and this struck me as something that people do go through.
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Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/5/2014 1:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Will... your reading and comment means allot.. and I will be by to read you as well... thank you again so much !! :)
Date: 2/4/2014 7:54:00 PM
WOWOWWOW!!!!! DEBBIE! THIS IS A DAMN MASTERPIECE! I LOVE IT! This poem is so deep and from the heart. I can feel your pain and anger. You didn't piss off no one, the Gods still love you, and I love the way you write, your not afraid to take a stab! Great write this is going to my favorites! Great write Debbie! :) xoxoxo hugs and kisses...
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Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/5/2014 1:35:00 PM
WOW Chris thank you so much again... your comments leave me speechless.... yes sometimes when the pain is that bad the only choice you have is to scream or let the pen scream... thank you again Chris... your comments always make my day !! :)
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