Pisces Girl

it's only a world
tick-tock
the Pisces girl

it's only heaven
tock-tick
half past eleven

it's only hell
tick-tick
ring the bell

it's only over
tock-tock
new range rover
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Adams Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 8:59 AM
Hi Pisces girl. Tick tock, I'm in heaven reading your Poem !
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 12:28 PM
Soupmail. I'm curious about something.
Loving Iii Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 7:42 PM
mysterious. intreigued. john
Mehta Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 6:28 PM
Creative and interesting write, casey
Culverhouse Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 7:41 PM
how long have you been writing poetry? I started in my teens.
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July 10, 2011 at 7:40 PM
Where are you from?? Welcome to poetry soup!
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July 10, 2011 at 2:09 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup... enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share creative poetry as this gem with luv... I am Gemini Girl..
Brown Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 8:33 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Casey. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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