Pisces Come Home

On troubled, moonless nights
Restless journeys along her shores
Foaming and frothing her warning
Her heart beating the pounding surf
Her heart beating dark and dangerous 
She broods, she beckons, she calls
Calls me to her cold, deep waters
Come, come home to me if you dare…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/19/2013 6:47:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your well deserved win, Tim
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Date: 12/18/2013 10:55:00 PM
Hi Tim, :) sending smiles.. Congratulations & thanks for supporting my contest. always~ LINDA
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Date: 10/13/2013 10:17:00 AM
Gosh Tim - this is daring. Think before you go. This is also my sign.. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Date: 10/8/2013 9:05:00 AM
This is so beautiful-- I love the call of the sea depicted here in romantic format. just wondering if this is your birth sign.... I'm not really into astrology myself, but just a thought.
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Date: 10/3/2013 7:24:00 AM
What a fitting end to this one Tim.. :)
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Date: 10/2/2013 5:42:00 PM
WOW! LINDA
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Date: 10/2/2013 5:35:00 PM
What an awesome way to show Pisces. So much better than just talking about the traits of the sign. WELL DONE. (btw, I LOVE pepperoni pizza, i only chose to diss it because it worked well to do it with my poems' meter!)
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Date: 10/2/2013 5:08:00 PM
Interesting lines penned..Don't go see Pisces cause I don't want you to feel that cold water..Thanks for stopping by..My father said about a year or maybe longer before he died that anything that was fun, entertaining or taste good was bad for a person and if it wasn't fun or entertaining or tasted terrible it was good for one..He said I don't understand that at all..Ha!!! Sara
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