Pisces Come Home

On troubled, moonless nights
Restless journeys along her shores
Foaming and frothing her warning
Her heart beating the pounding surf
Her heart beating dark and dangerous 
She broods, she beckons, she calls
Calls me to her cold, deep waters
Come, come home to me if you dare…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mehta Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 6:47 AM
Enjoyed reading your well deserved win, Tim
A   Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 10:55 PM
Hi Tim, :) sending smiles.. Congratulations & thanks for supporting my contest. always~ LINDA
Carrillo Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 10:17 AM
Gosh Tim - this is daring. Think before you go. This is also my sign.. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
Van Breda Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 9:05 AM
This is so beautiful-- I love the call of the sea depicted here in romantic format. just wondering if this is your birth sign.... I'm not really into astrology myself, but just a thought.
Neels Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 7:24 AM
What a fitting end to this one Tim.. :)
A   Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 5:42 PM
WOW! LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 5:35 PM
What an awesome way to show Pisces. So much better than just talking about the traits of the sign. WELL DONE. (btw, I LOVE pepperoni pizza, i only chose to diss it because it worked well to do it with my poems' meter!)
Kendrick Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 5:08 PM
Interesting lines penned..Don't go see Pisces cause I don't want you to feel that cold water..Thanks for stopping by..My father said about a year or maybe longer before he died that anything that was fun, entertaining or taste good was bad for a person and if it wasn't fun or entertaining or tasted terrible it was good for one..He said I don't understand that at all..Ha!!! Sara
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