Pisces

I am love, 
more than lost. 
I am more artist, than living person.
I will not give you the look in my eye,
Nor the eye of the storm. 
Or any other mechanical thought 
That beams from the corners of my 
mouth.

It is the world, 
Changing like the weather
Weaving storms into words 
And my voice into clarity.
It pools just like this:
Furious and deep, 
behind the rumination of my eyes. 

I am half fish in this world, 
more lost in the sea, 
than whole in your arms. 
Your sideways glance
Into the well, 
Reminds me of distances I swim
to be heard.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007



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Date: 12/4/2008 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/29/2008 8:41:00 PM
Julia - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 11/19/2008 4:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2008 7:55:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 8/15/2008 9:38:00 AM
Congrads on being featured. This is, at least, amazing and true. I feel like this, and can relate. Regards, Sara
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Date: 8/13/2008 3:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured I am a pisces myself! Laura :)
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Date: 8/11/2008 9:44:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this again. Congratulations Julia on this excellent poem being featured once again. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/11/2008 5:18:00 AM
Very witty poem - Loved it - Congrats on being featured - God Bless
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Date: 8/11/2008 4:02:00 AM
Once again this excellent poem is featured congratulations Julia. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2008 5:39:00 PM
Another congratulations Julia for the re-featuring of "Pisces." Vince
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