Pisces

Psychic mind, unlike a clairvoyant who often misreads,
Intelligent-- more intuitive kind-- than quantum theory,
Surprising to anyone who underestimates a dreamer
Creatively interpreting life, often an abstract painting,
Emotionally brush-stroked on meaningful soul-fabric,
Sensitively divulging sage-wisdom in tacit vocabulary.

March 31, 2021
Placed 1st: A Brian Strand July 3 Contest
Placed 3rd: Star sign premium poetry contest
Sponsor: Charlotte Puddifoot
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Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 5:48 AM
Congrats on your high winner. Way to go. I enjoyed reading about Pisces. Your visit to my page was enlightening. Sara
George Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 6:20 AM
Amazing brevity with fathomless depth ! Love this Vijay!
Allison Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 12:30 PM
Lovely to read this again Vijay, Many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 9:21 AM
Back with congrats again. I did not get a win for Virgo in that first contest. I wonder if I should try it in an acrostics contest of Brian's! Yours is always a winner!
Kauffman Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 12:02 PM
Vijay, your wording and images always amaze me. They are full of life like a life giving river. They inspire me to dig deeper into the wisdom of words. Congratulations on your win. This is truly marvelous. All the best. Blessings to you!
Pandit Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 5:15 AM
So very kind of you to say so, Sam. Means a lot coming from a brilliant writer. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 9:29 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write and information. Have a blessed day...........
Pandit Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 2:07 PM
Thank you Paula--much appreciate.
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 3:43 AM
Very well done! great choice of words! A win well deserved!! congrats!!
Pandit Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 5:32 AM
Much appreciate Krish--many thanks.
Allison Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 2:41 PM
Excellent acrostic Vijay, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Pandit Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 5:32 AM
Thank you Jan. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Gilmour Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 1:27 PM
Many congratulations dear Vijay for your top win in Charlotte's contest. I too am a Piscean and that is why I love to escape into my poetry. A wonderful poem you have penned. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Pandit Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 2:11 PM
Glad you liked the poem my friend. I am sure in some respects we must think alike being of the same sign. Much appreciate, Ann. Many thanks.
Puddifoot Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 12:41 PM
a well written, different take on pisces which is also deep and profound; i like that you avoided just merely listing the traits of the sign - congrats on your win in my contest!
Pandit Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 2:10 PM
Thank you Charlotte for holding contests and taking the time to write meaningful comments. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Gentile Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 6:48 AM
How did you define me so well Vijay!! Love your Piscean prose!! well done!
Pandit Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 12:26 PM
Your sign as well I take it. We think alike my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 4:59 PM
you really do fit your sign, Vijay!!! Good one for you!
Pandit Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 5:46 AM
Thank you Andrea. Much appreciate.
Costales Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 12:00 AM
Hmm- a poem using acrostic for the star sign contest seems a formidable task but yours is seamless and the thoughts are imaginative. Nice.
Pandit Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 5:39 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments, Josefina. Many thanks.
Ball Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 10:11 AM
Beautifully done Vijay. An excellent entry for the contest. God Bless and Happy Easter to you and yours. Praise The Lord! He Is Risen! JB
Pandit Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 10:56 AM
Thank you Judy. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Canerdy Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 4:11 PM
Excellent, Vijay, vividly descriptive. Janice
Pandit Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 5:28 AM
Thank you Janice--much appreciate.
Y. Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 2:03 PM
WoW! Vijay, This is an amazing acrostic for a Pisces. Thanks for a sharing a glimpse of you. Best wishes in the contest. My late father was a Pisces and my birthday was 14 days after his. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 5:28 AM
Thank you my friend for your kind remarks. Much appreciate your visit and comments. You have a wonderful weekend as well, Alexis. And Happy Birthday (belated or otherwise).
Crabtree Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 4:29 PM
A perfect Acrostic for a Pisces. A definite fave. Hope you have a great weekend, Vijay :)
Pandit Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 5:42 AM
Thank you Angela for your kind feedback. Much appreciate. And a special thank you for the FAVE.
Callus Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 8:10 AM
These six lines show your creativity, Vijay. Poetry is not just what you say, but how you say it! Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 5:41 AM
So very kind of you, Paul. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Trifiatis Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 3:18 AM
A rare look into Man's soul! Outstanding Acrostic dearest, Vijay! Stay safe!
Pandit Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 5:35 AM
That is very special coming from you my friend. Many thanks Demetrios. Much appreciate, as always.
Nicole Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 5:22 PM
"A dreamer, sage-wisdom in tacit vocabulary" Yes, I completely agree. You paint such vivid images with your words, my dear friend. This is beautiful in every way. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 5:34 AM
Thank you my dear friend--always a joy to read your comments. Many thanks, Brandy.
Rose  Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 10:50 AM
What a beautiful sign, I was born on March 6, so I am a pisces, mom would say to me when I was young, your like the fishes in the sea, you come and you go with a mind of your own. How I miss her. Thankyou for this lovely poem today, winning wishes, and God speed :)
Pandit Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 5:33 AM
Your poems are often reflective of the compliments your Mom bestowed upon you my friend. She is proud of you up there in heaven! Thank you for your kind remarks. Many thanks, Vienna.
Devonshire Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 8:12 AM
Vijay, I'm a water sign too. Moon Children get along well with Pisces and your sign is known well for the traits you describe so beautifully in your poem. Best wishes for a big win, my friend! Have a nice Easter. Hugs, Carolyn
Pandit Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 5:30 AM
Happy Easter to you, Carolyn. People friendly and sensitive--you are a jewel of the water sign my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.
Cunningham Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 8:02 AM
You captured your star sign so well Vijay in your deep and meaningful verse. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
Pandit Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 5:24 AM
So nice to hear that. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Tom. Many thanks.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 6:59 AM
You poem always goes a step higher than the normal ones. Your interpretation of the sign is so elevated and so deep in meaning.
Pandit Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 5:23 AM
So nice of you to say so. Much appreciate your kind support, Victor. Many thanks.
Sands Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 5:43 AM
Great one Vijay. Succinct and well written :)
Pandit Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 5:23 AM
Thank you Heidi. Glad you liked the poem. Much appreciate, as always.
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