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Pisces

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Pushy people-person, little silver fish Inspiring idealist, with an iridescent swish Swimming up the river, flowing all the way back down Colour loving creature, too deep and you will drown Ever-seeking others, happy in the shoal Stop and think, when on the brink, are you happy in your goal 31/03/2021

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/14/2021 11:57:00 AM

Congratulations "little silver fish!" I learned so much about Pisces from your delightful, information packed, lines! So well done with a flow like water for a water sign. Well done Janine!

Janine Lever
Date: 4/24/2021 11:08:00 AM

Thank you for your comments ha ha i really appreciate them.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/12/2021 4:22:00 PM

I like these astrology pieces. Good luck in the contest.

Janine Lever
Date: 4/24/2021 11:01:00 AM

Thank you richard.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/11/2021 9:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your write. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Janine Lever
Date: 4/11/2021 10:40:00 AM

Thank you paula. much appreciated. xx

Jan Allison

Date: 4/10/2021 2:40:00 PM

you made me smile Janine i know a few pisceans this could apply to, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Janine Lever
Date: 4/11/2021 10:41:00 AM

Thank you and glad you enjoyed it, being a piscean, i know why you smiled. best wishes xx

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 4/10/2021 12:36:00 PM

what a cute little poem but profound too; i really enjoyed this unique take and how you avoided just merely listing the traits of the sign - well done and congrats on your win in my contest! :)

Janine Lever
Date: 4/11/2021 10:42:00 AM

Thank you charlotte, your comments are very much appreciated. And thank you for posting the competition. best wishes xx

Robert Pettit

Date: 4/2/2021 4:11:00 PM

Nicely written with good rhyming. I'm sure anyone born under this sign will appreciate your poem.

Janine Lever
Date: 4/11/2021 10:43:00 AM

Thank you robert much appreciated. best wishes xx

Deborah Burrows

Date: 4/2/2021 3:39:00 PM

Really made me happy, cute!

Janine Lever
Date: 4/11/2021 10:44:00 AM

Thank you deborah, glad you felt lifted by it, that makes me happy. much appreciated. best wishes xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/31/2021 11:41:00 AM

Well done, Janine!

Janine Lever
Date: 4/1/2021 6:27:00 AM

Thank you, dont usually try other forms than rhyme or free verse, but i have had a go. much appreciate your comments.xx