Janine Lever Poet Acrostic

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Pisces

Pushy people-person, little silver fish
Inspiring idealist, with an iridescent swish
Swimming up the river, flowing all the way back down
Colour loving creature, too deep and you will drown
Ever-seeking others, happy in the shoal
Stop and think, when on the brink, are you happy in your goal

31/03/2021

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Sam Kauffman April 14, 2021 at 11:57 AM Congratulations "little silver fish!" I learned so much about Pisces from your delightful, information packed, lines! So well done with a flow like water for a water sign. Well done Janine! Janine Lever April 24, 2021 at 11:08 AM Thank you for your comments ha ha i really appreciate them.

Richard Lamoureux April 12, 2021 at 4:22 PM I like these astrology pieces. Good luck in the contest. Janine Lever April 24, 2021 at 11:01 AM Thank you richard.

Paula Goldsmith April 11, 2021 at 9:27 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your write. Have a blessed day writing away.................. Janine Lever April 11, 2021 at 10:40 AM Thank you paula. much appreciated. xx

Jan Allison April 10, 2021 at 2:40 PM you made me smile Janine i know a few pisceans this could apply to, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Janine Lever April 11, 2021 at 10:41 AM Thank you and glad you enjoyed it, being a piscean, i know why you smiled. best wishes xx

Charlotte Puddifoot April 10, 2021 at 12:36 PM what a cute little poem but profound too; i really enjoyed this unique take and how you avoided just merely listing the traits of the sign - well done and congrats on your win in my contest! :) Janine Lever April 11, 2021 at 10:42 AM Thank you charlotte, your comments are very much appreciated. And thank you for posting the competition. best wishes xx

Robert Pettit April 2, 2021 at 4:11 PM Nicely written with good rhyming. I'm sure anyone born under this sign will appreciate your poem. Janine Lever April 11, 2021 at 10:43 AM Thank you robert much appreciated. best wishes xx

Deborah Burrows April 2, 2021 at 3:39 PM Really made me happy, cute! Janine Lever April 11, 2021 at 10:44 AM Thank you deborah, glad you felt lifted by it, that makes me happy. much appreciated. best wishes xx

Rico Leffanta March 31, 2021 at 11:41 AM Well done, Janine! Janine Lever April 1, 2021 at 6:27 AM Thank you, dont usually try other forms than rhyme or free verse, but i have had a go. much appreciate your comments.xx