Notes About The Poem

Pisces

Playing joyfully, ambling blissfully
In, not within, pulse of life in motion
Soothing softly, healing mist suffusing
Compassion pouring, countenance comely
Emotion effusing bliss elation
Sowing seeds of love, serenely sprouting

30-March-2021

(syllabic rhyming Acrostic)

Star Sign Acrostics'
Sponsored by: Charlotte Puddifoot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 12:06 PM
Such a feeling of tranquility Seeker. This is like looking through clear water to discover the treasure that lies beneath the surface water. Many congratulations on your win!
Seeker Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 6:48 PM
Thank you, Sam! These contests are interesting, otherwise it’s unlikely I’d write on any zodiac sign
Allison Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 2:42 PM
Love the alliteration Seeker, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Seeker Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 8:09 PM
Thank you, Jan! I’ve yet to read the other entries! I’m sure you will be there, somewhere near the top!
Puddifoot Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 12:46 PM
i really like this one; great use of alliteration and rhyme, and i like that you avoided just merely listing the traits of the sign - congrats on your win in my contest!
Seeker Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 8:08 PM
Thanks for hosting this creative contest, Charlotte! Always delighted to participate!
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 8:44 PM
Perfect you, US. <3
Seeker Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 8:51 PM
hahaha! If you say so! Happy you enjoyed, Eve!
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