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Piscean Pull

Wow—is the word! You are something most surprising I can feel you boiling in my blood Waiting, trusting in that torrent Of psychic union and revelation You lock eyes with me— They are blue, love-stricken, wild I am pleasantly frightened And comforted all at once! Somewhere in your stare You have managed to caress my soul You have masterfully, Grabbed hold… Of all that is me— This red force of obduration This imprisoned fool I am… Fretting at every given moment In my vulnerability - how is it? How is it that you know, That you know our future is strong? You just know, This fiery….greed, These flaws that shame me Somehow you know this fear in me! And everything you know, You will see You will acceptingly see You first doused me with glittery lust Steam and gleam in your keen pupils In your gaping lips, In your smooth-trodden truths, I weaken in your words You flow me out of my element, As you pin me to the bed of dreams You are an opulent ocean Deep depths I know not! I am merely a sliver of light Becoming something solid in your grasp Crystalline nerves melting in your knowing hands Where is your surrender? You ask me, in silence I am your ball of glowing fervor About to burst in your psychedelic waves You are turning and turning You are feeling me You are feeling all my feelings! That I try so desperately to conceal Dissatisfaction and longing you recognize In my volcanic hindrance Your waters heave patience You calm—you tear up My fears hold me back, And you want me to free them This struggle is our beauty— Is part of our art And in you, in your rest You salvage all the love we can muster You remember all our moments Fueling your empathic currents Holding me close to your heaving tides In a heartfelt flood of understanding

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Date: 10/6/2018 1:26:00 PM
Incredible write Laura, filled with beautiful lines of passion and longing. "You flow me out of my element, As you pin me to the bed of dreams," "This struggle is our beauty— Is part of our art." Wonderful.
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Date: 4/13/2018 6:54:00 PM
Endangered in the enchantment of being discovered, and cherished for that which you truly are, by one worthy, and also by by one whom desires the same. I love the romantic and vibrant honesty in this poem Poetess..."I am your ball of glowing fervor about to burst in your psychedelic waves...", awesome passion woman...J.A.B. A FAV!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/14/2018 2:22:00 AM
I'm utterly in love with the psychic flow of Piscean passion, Justin. Thank you so much for reviewing this poem. Your input means the world to me. <3~Laura
Date: 3/21/2018 10:33:00 PM
Gosh Woman - you have a way with words, sheer passion in these lines. You take your readers on a roller coaster of emotions. Great write Laura....Maria
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/22/2018 10:43:00 AM
Thanks so much for reading this one, and for the sweet compliment, Maria. This was quite emotional indeed. I appreciate your visits.<3 ~Laura
Date: 3/21/2018 5:44:00 AM
Laura, this is such a passion filled write, the foreplay of your words makes me want to read more. Enjoyed this. John
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/21/2018 5:15:00 PM
"the foreplay of your words" - I love that! Thank you John. So glad you enjoyed. <3~Laura
Date: 3/19/2018 8:57:00 PM
Hello Laura Breidenthal, wow! This is a wonderful written poem. I enjoyed the read. have a nice evening my friend.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/20/2018 9:16:00 AM
Hello, Darlene! Your comment made me smile, thank you so much! <3~Laura
Date: 3/19/2018 8:51:00 PM
A sustained outpouring of passion like a long slow release. I dig the way you take a nuance and turn it into a novel. So cool.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/20/2018 9:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Richard. I appreciate your visit here. "A sustained outpouring of passion" - a nice, appropriate expression for this write. A slow release is right! Thanks again... <3 ~Laura

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