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Pirouette De Agua

Dance to the depths delight
Swirling in sun blue light
Pick then the perfect line
On point as in Ondine
Twirl and fall to this far
So know now who you are
Lone in waves once content
To life's lyrics well spent
Your song sounding still right
Wet whirls glow in the night




couplet  10 lines  53 words
11/13/22
Ondine is a ballet play
about a water nymph who
is the object of desire 
of a young prince

Color pencil illustration
by G. Gaul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Radice Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 8:17 AM
Love your couplet, theme, rhyming, flow and your wonderful illustration Greg. Cheers - Gary
Gaul Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 7:26 PM
Gary, your visits are always thrilling. Filled with good will and insight. Thank you so much.
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