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Dance to the depths delight Swirling in sun blue light Pick then the perfect line On point as in Ondine Twirl and fall to this far So know now who you are Lone in waves once content To life's lyrics well spent Your song sounding still right Wet whirls glow in the night couplet 10 lines 53 words 11/13/22 Ondine is a ballet play about a water nymph who is the object of desire of a young prince Color pencil illustration by G. Gaul

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Date: 11/13/2022 8:17:00 AM
Love your couplet, theme, rhyming, flow and your wonderful illustration Greg. Cheers - Gary
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Greg Gaul
Date: 11/13/2022 7:26:00 PM
Gary, your visits are always thrilling. Filled with good will and insight. Thank you so much.

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