Pip Squeak

pip-squeak in the air
   rams a fleeing big black crow
         — torpedoed and stunned

5/22/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 1:21 PM
Ha! Love it :) an aside, my first pair of pet finches we named Pip and Squeak ;) xomo!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 1:28 PM
Love It! Thanks for sharing! How fun, dear Maureen!
Hoffman Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 9:01 PM
Those pip squeaks are brave little birds to be ramming a big black crow; great imagery in this awesome nature write Kim!~Che :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 9:21 PM
Thanks, Che!
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 3:03 PM
What a picture, Kim!! RAM! Bam!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 7:30 PM
Thanks...LOL
Cunningham Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 9:59 AM
Lovely image Kim, the wonders of nature captured in 3 lines. Tom.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 7:29 PM
Thanks, Tom!
Cozart Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 9:46 AM
I see mockingbirds do this everyday during nesting season!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 7:29 PM
Fun to see!
Williams Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 7:31 AM
Great imagery here in just 3 lines, Kim. Amazing Haiku....Maria xx
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 7:32 AM
I saw this happen! LOL
La France Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 7:26 AM
Kim, this is cute, I could see it in my mind ~
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 7:32 AM
Thanks, Constance! <3 Kim
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