Home » Poems » Kim Rodrigues » Pip Squeak

Kim Rodrigues | + Follow Poet |

Pip Squeak

pip-squeak in the air rams a fleeing big black crow — torpedoed and stunned 5/22/2018

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/23/2018 1:21:00 PM

Ha! Love it :) an aside, my first pair of pet finches we named Pip and Squeak ;) xomo!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2018 1:28:00 PM

Love It! Thanks for sharing! How fun, dear Maureen!

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 5/22/2018 9:01:00 PM

Those pip squeaks are brave little birds to be ramming a big black crow; great imagery in this awesome nature write Kim!~Che :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/22/2018 9:21:00 PM

Thanks, Che!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2018 3:03:00 PM

What a picture, Kim!! RAM! Bam!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/22/2018 7:30:00 PM

Thanks...LOL

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/22/2018 9:59:00 AM

Lovely image Kim, the wonders of nature captured in 3 lines. Tom.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/22/2018 7:29:00 PM

Thanks, Tom!

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 5/22/2018 9:46:00 AM

I see mockingbirds do this everyday during nesting season!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/22/2018 7:29:00 PM

Fun to see!

Maria Williams

Date: 5/22/2018 7:31:00 AM

Great imagery here in just 3 lines, Kim. Amazing Haiku....Maria xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/22/2018 7:32:00 AM

I saw this happen! LOL

Constance La France

Date: 5/22/2018 7:26:00 AM

Kim, this is cute, I could see it in my mind ~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/22/2018 7:32:00 AM

Thanks, Constance! <3 Kim