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Pintka 1

summer solstice moon bright as an oncoming train pressing silver light into my glistening pint carving stark shadows from the night Michael F. Lewis 6/21/2013 Invented another new style... tanka + pint = pintka

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Date: 6/22/2013 3:40:00 PM
How the f ... is an oncoming train bright ? Even a pissed up shite can't be shite !
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Michael F Lewis
Date: 6/22/2013 4:28:00 PM
talk...walk....forget it, I need another stout....lol
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Michael F Lewis
Date: 6/22/2013 4:27:00 PM
In your case Nigel, maybe you should just talk into the light...never mined the tunnel brother, walk on!

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