Michael F Lewis Poet Tanka

Pintka 1

summer solstice moon
bright as an oncoming train
pressing silver light
into my glistening pint
carving stark shadows from the night

Michael F. Lewis
6/21/2013

Invented another new style...
tanka + pint = pintka

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Nigel Fox June 22, 2013 at 3:40 PM How the f ... is an oncoming train bright ? Even a pissed up shite can't be shite ! Michael F Lewis June 22, 2013 at 4:28 PM talk...walk....forget it, I need another stout....lol Michael F Lewis June 22, 2013 at 4:27 PM In your case Nigel, maybe you should just talk into the light...never mined the tunnel brother, walk on!