Pinocchio

Pinocchio’s wife had it good She’d thank lucky stars if she could For you see in the change The Blue Fairy arranged To leave the guy plenty of wood

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/12/2012 12:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Limerick Fun, Limerick Crazy" contest Mike. Love, Carol

Mike Dailey
Date: 6/17/2012 2:58:00 PM

Thanks Carol. I hope some readers were not offended by some of the limericks I posted that day.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/11/2012 8:10:00 PM

Congrats, Mike. Well deserved 1st place. Excellent. Kudos. Ralph

Mike Dailey
Date: 6/17/2012 2:59:00 PM

Thanks Ralph. I just got back from DC and saw the contest results and comments. I love it when one of my poems hits a cord with the readers on the Soup.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2012 1:16:00 PM

Mike, a super congrats in my contest... I had lots of giggles reading all my entries,..xox~pd

Mike Dailey
Date: 6/17/2012 2:56:00 PM

I sure am glad you liked one of mine. I got a bit carried away with the linerick form and my wife said I went too far with some of the lines.

Terry O'Leary

Date: 6/5/2012 3:17:00 PM

clever... I wood knot have thought of it myself...Terry