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Pinocchio

Pinocchio spies scissors - no strings attached or just a mere puppet?

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 1/7/2023 8:30:00 PM

Very clever - Pinocchio on the lamb, free of constraints - no strings to bind him. Your Monoku also provokes thought - a boy of free will + not a mere puppet? Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/7/2023 9:03:00 PM

Thank you, Brian!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/20/2022 6:47:00 PM

Perhaps Pinocchio actually wanted to snip those smarmy suspenders! lol.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/20/2022 8:29:00 PM

LOL! Right?!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/14/2022 11:52:00 AM

I wonder what will happen to Pinocchio if he gets the scissors? You need a sequel to this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/14/2022 6:18:00 PM

Thank you, Sara!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/11/2022 6:10:00 PM

Everyone loves to be free, no one wants to be a puppet, with strings attached. good one Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/14/2022 6:18:00 PM

Thanks, Rose!

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/10/2022 12:41:00 PM

Even with no strings attached, they are still all mere puppets:) Nicely done!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/10/2022 3:56:00 PM

A thinker, you are :) Thanks!

Paul Bell

Date: 12/10/2022 7:02:00 AM

He was going to cut the strings at some point. Free to roam.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/10/2022 3:57:00 PM

Yup…the strings get cut and then what…

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/9/2022 11:02:00 PM

No strings for Pinocchio, but he was a mischievous boy. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/10/2022 3:57:00 PM

He was mischievous indeed. He had to learn.