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Pinocchio

Pinocchio spies scissors -
                   no strings attached or just a mere puppet?

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2022

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Brian Sambourne

January 7, 2023 at 8:30 PM

Very clever - Pinocchio on the lamb, free of constraints - no strings to bind him. Your Monoku also provokes thought - a boy of free will + not a mere puppet? Congratulations!

January 7, 2023 at 9:03 PM

Thank you, Brian!

December 20, 2022 at 6:47 PM

Perhaps Pinocchio actually wanted to snip those smarmy suspenders! lol.

December 20, 2022 at 8:29 PM

LOL! Right?!

December 14, 2022 at 11:52 AM

I wonder what will happen to Pinocchio if he gets the scissors? You need a sequel to this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

December 14, 2022 at 6:18 PM

Thank you, Sara!

Mystic Rose Rose

December 11, 2022 at 6:10 PM

Everyone loves to be free, no one wants to be a puppet, with strings attached. good one Kim

December 14, 2022 at 6:18 PM

Thanks, Rose!

Joseph P. DiMino

December 10, 2022 at 12:41 PM

Even with no strings attached, they are still all mere puppets:) Nicely done!

December 10, 2022 at 3:56 PM

A thinker, you are :) Thanks!

December 10, 2022 at 7:02 AM

He was going to cut the strings at some point. Free to roam.

December 10, 2022 at 3:57 PM

Yup…the strings get cut and then what…

Victor Buhagiar

December 9, 2022 at 11:02 PM

No strings for Pinocchio, but he was a mischievous boy. Hugs.

December 10, 2022 at 3:57 PM

He was mischievous indeed. He had to learn.

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