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Pinnacle

PINNACLE With a piggyback of hopes and dreams, I set forth to reach a peak. Along bed of roses, rocks and tall sharp weeds, I harvested golden grains of progress. The days and nights rang a wake-up kiss on my head. They told me: "Move on, move on...Don't ever give up..." There are rainy days on the way. A rain shower teased my climb halting me for awhile. Some so strong, I faltered - gained some wounds. Some directly stabbed my heart. And somehow, sometimes they even knocked my very soul. Although tough thunder tremors shook me, I fought hard to stand still continuing my climb. Each height I step onto, I came to know moon and stars. Some of them began a war with me. Some of them a veil of fraud. But blessing, most have shed a continuing guiding light. Some hugged me. And wanted me to stay but some pushed and pressured me until I am all like a dripping sponge. The potpourri situations brought me: a ladder closer to our God. His faithfulness and unfailing love a durable adhesive to my persistence and dreams. A rainbow after each rain drew a promise of sun-kissed days. They melted the cold lonely years away. They permitted me a walk and run to heavenly meadows. Finally, I reached the pinnacle where grins a forever familiar tale. (c) Olive Eloisa 2:07pm October 01. 2012

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Date: 10/2/2014 10:53:00 AM
Beautiful all through. Touched straight away by the first line. Your positive attitude to look and move ahead, despite all setbacks, is admirable. The heavenly meadows are meant for people like you! // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/3/2014 1:26:00 AM
thanks much Paul.. :) I really appreciate your comment.. :) I am hoping that as my journey ends in this life with God's grace I am hoping that ill arrive at that.. :) God bless you..//hugs.
Date: 10/2/2014 6:49:00 AM
very beautifully painted olive excellent pen dear friend
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/2/2014 9:18:00 AM
Thanks much Liam.. I appreciate it.. :) I love your free verse poems.. :D
Date: 10/1/2014 12:13:00 PM
Wow Olive real amazing write is sure to fly high! Best wishes dear!
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Date: 10/1/2014 7:42:00 PM
thanks much Dr. Upma.. :) I appreciate this.. :) GBU

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