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Pink Sky at Night

I really want the moon, who smiles oh so bright, to be a little different, if only for tonight. Last night it was a circle, same as the night before, its always been a circle, and that is such a bore. So little star up in the sky, I wish I may and might, make the moon a triangle, and make it pink, not white. 2/21/16 *Last night my 2 year old daughter saw the moon and said, "I really want the moon to be a triangle, but it keeps being a circle!"

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Date: 9/11/2017 2:56:00 PM
Um-m-mGrahamburglar.. I have never seen a pink moon. Have you? Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 6/2/2016 12:19:00 PM
Cute.... Just say, let it be...... and it will be.
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Date: 5/4/2016 3:55:00 PM
Kids can be such a cute inspiration! Do you recall "kids say the darndest things?" Very nice!
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The Grahamburglar
Date: 5/5/2016 12:14:00 PM
I do recall "kids say the darndest things"...haha, and it ain't no lie either. My daughter constantly cracks me up with the way she chooses to express her ideas, lol. If only we all had such creativity in word choice, and flexibility in how we see and interpret the world! Anyway, thanks for stopping by and commenting. -G
Date: 5/4/2016 1:35:00 AM
Nice and short. Keep it up!
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The Grahamburglar
Date: 5/5/2016 12:12:00 PM
Thank you, sir!
Date: 5/4/2016 12:51:00 AM
Very cute poem...I'd wager you could do a full book of poems for shildren ^_^
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Date: 5/5/2016 12:12:00 PM
The thought has crossed my mind...now to find someone willing to publish that mess for me. Haha.