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Pink petals

Pink petals filled the air
Oh what a lovey vision 
Flowing gently everywhere 
Filling the yards 
And streets as well
As gentle as angels 
Feathers they fell
Unscented and so frail
Unlike rain or snow
Or frozen hail
I felt ubiquitous 
In their wake
My breath paused
In awe for goodness sake
As if within a dome
Someone controlled 
Shaking it all
My eyes did roam
To the ground and 
Street as well
For hours pink
Petals surely fell

Copyright © Kelli White | Year Posted 2024

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Christina Bowring Date: 5/12/2024 3:42:00 PM Dear Kelli, this is such an enchanting and visually delightful read. ‘As gentle as angels’ ‘ feathers they fell’ such delicate words to describe the fragility of the petals cascading down. So well written and instills a wonderful scene into the readers mind of colour. Love the comparison of a snow globe as well - a petal globe. Really enjoyed it. Blessings to you :):) Login to Reply Kelli White Date: 5/14/2024 12:07:00 PM Thank you very much Christina Kelli White Date: 5/14/2024 12:00:00 PM Thank you very much Christina

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 5/3/2024 3:46:00 AM Ah, I love the w ay you covered our imagination with sweet petals of beauty and color. Nicely done Kelli, glad your a poet like me :) Login to Reply Kelli White Date: 5/7/2024 6:41:00 AM Thank you very much MR, Kelli

Silent One Date: 5/1/2024 1:04:00 PM You described it very well.. Login to Reply Kelli White Date: 5/2/2024 11:06:00 PM Thank you SO

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 5/1/2024 6:42:00 AM Dear Kelli, your poetic imagery of pink petals cascading like delicate feathers fills the heart with wonder. Your poetic words show a scene of ethereal beauty, evoking a sense of awe and tranquility. I loved that amidst the flurry of petals, there's a timeless grace that captivates the soul. This exquisite moment of nature's gentle embrace. - Blessings, Daniel Login to Reply Kelli White Date: 5/2/2024 11:06:00 PM So very kind of you Daniel

Susan Ashley Date: 4/30/2024 5:32:00 PM Dear Kelli, your beautiful poem reminds me of when the cherry blossom trees drop their pink petals upon the lawns along the streets. Splendid poetry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply Kelli White Date: 5/2/2024 11:07:00 PM You know exactly what I experienced Susan, thank you