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PINK PERFECTION

PINK PERFECTION
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lotus
pink perfection
rising from murky depths
unfolding beauty, grace, and peace
hope

Copyright © sara Etgen-Baker | Year Posted 2025

12th gradeflowerhopecinquain

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July 26, 2025 at 3:19 AM

I don't think I have seen a true lotus in person, but some waterlilies have been viewed by me, and they are beautiful. I can see how a person can rise from dark, murky, swamp like conditions to become a very beautiful person once they become a person of faith. Thanks for sharing this one with me. Sara K

sara Etgen-Baker

July 26, 2025 at 3:32 AM

awww, such lovely comments! I appreciate your spiritual insights of which I agree. have a pleasant day, Ms. Sara K. hugs, Sara B

July 25, 2025 at 11:02 PM

So simple yet deeply powerful—this poem captures the lotus as a timeless symbol of beauty and hope rising from darkness. A perfect little meditation on resilience and grace.

sara Etgen-Baker

July 26, 2025 at 3:32 AM

thanks for visiting, Rowena, and for your insightful comments about the depth of this poem. Color me grateful, hugs, Sara

July 25, 2025 at 9:26 PM

a lovely Cinquain poem, Sara. Hugs, Bill

sara Etgen-Baker

July 26, 2025 at 3:30 AM

thanks, dear hubby. Appreciate you reading all my poems, hugs from me to you

July 25, 2025 at 7:29 PM

beautiful ~

sara Etgen-Baker

July 26, 2025 at 3:30 AM

many thanks! have a pleasant day,

Mystic Rose Rose

July 25, 2025 at 6:31 PM

You have an eye for beauty and writing great lines too, love this !

sara Etgen-Baker

July 26, 2025 at 3:31 AM

awww, such delightful comments from my sweet poet friend. Appreciate your visit...glad you liked it, hugs, Sara

July 25, 2025 at 5:31 PM

Perfect word to end with! Nice!

sara Etgen-Baker

July 26, 2025 at 3:29 AM

thank you, sweet Kim! hugs, Sara

July 25, 2025 at 11:30 AM

Hope and beauty, rising from murk - love it!

sara Etgen-Baker

July 25, 2025 at 5:29 PM

thank you, David, for your visit and for your supportive comments. Wishing you well, Sara

Victor Buhagiar

July 25, 2025 at 5:55 AM

You captured thoughts on an aquatic plant. I love these types of plants. Glad to see you back.

sara Etgen-Baker

July 25, 2025 at 5:29 PM

appreciate your visit, Victor, and for the welcome back. I, too, love the lotus plant. They're so unique, have a blessed evening, Sara

July 25, 2025 at 5:40 AM

Beautiful poem Sara :)

sara Etgen-Baker

July 25, 2025 at 5:28 PM

thank you for visiting and commenting, sweet Heidi. Have a great evening, Sara

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