PINK PERFECTION

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PINK PERFECTION ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ lotus pink perfection rising from murky depths unfolding beauty, grace, and peace hope

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/26/2025 3:19:00 AM

I don't think I have seen a true lotus in person, but some waterlilies have been viewed by me, and they are beautiful. I can see how a person can rise from dark, murky, swamp like conditions to become a very beautiful person once they become a person of faith. Thanks for sharing this one with me. Sara K

Sara Baker
Date: 7/26/2025 3:32:00 AM

awww, such lovely comments! I appreciate your spiritual insights of which I agree. have a pleasant day, Ms. Sara K. hugs, Sara B

Rowena Velasco

Date: 7/25/2025 11:02:00 PM

So simple yet deeply powerful—this poem captures the lotus as a timeless symbol of beauty and hope rising from darkness. A perfect little meditation on resilience and grace.

Sara Baker
Date: 7/26/2025 3:32:00 AM

thanks for visiting, Rowena, and for your insightful comments about the depth of this poem. Color me grateful, hugs, Sara